oh sound selection is important too
And I came from sharpe channel
JD gave you good advice, your drums are a bit chaotic, try to remake drum patterns from your fav songs. Mix needs some work too but thats mostly eq and leveling, the rest will come later.
I will admit it's better then the first beat but it's not an 808 mafia beat and the mix needs some work by the way just constructive criticism so don't go crazy lol
@yennbeats