@trevor4025

omna man

@11th---0

Great vid man keep it up

@T.Riker_

Great video!

@venomgaming7014

2 things.

1: this seems too much like just reading a script.
2: SCHAFRILLAS ALREADY DID THIS EXACT TOPIC 3 YEARS AGO

@simonsdad6205

Didn’t schaffrilas do this

@JulioMendoza-up1pv

He’s revealed to be a villain in the first episode…? I thought the point of a twist villain is that the fact that they are a villain is a twist, not just stated first episode

@RyanPerryMusic

Great video! I would recommend varying the word choice a little bit, there are several parts where it’s comes off pretty awkward repeating the same words. Adding a little emphasis in your tone when repeating words can help when you’re trying to make a point of it. Also maybe change your email 😂

@diegoenciso7693

Are you sure?

@Macenova

this sounds too much like just reading from a script, take it from somebody that struggles with having a monotone voice similar to yours, when your doing content creation, you gotta give your voice more emotion